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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 962 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is cold? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Joseph’s cheek. (b) Joseph was cold. (c) Joseph’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  2. 2.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is scared? (a) Arjun was scared. (b) Arjun froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Arjun gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) hearing
  4. 4.Which strong verb means “burned brightly and fiercely”? (a) leapt (b) whispered (c) blazed
  5. 5.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) His heart was a drum during the race. (b) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (c) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) The jalebi was as sweet as honey. (c) Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  7. 7.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Catch the ball!” shouted Saanvi. (b) Catch the ball! shouted Saanvi. (c) “Catch the ball”! shouted Saanvi.
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) smell
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is bored? (a) Kavya was bored. (b) Kavya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock. (c) A tear rolled slowly down Kavya’s cheek.
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) foaming
  11. 11.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) juicy (b) okay (c) nice
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) hearing
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch
  14. 14.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the exam has begun,” ___ Nisha.
    (a) asked (b) whispered (c) shouted
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Arjun. (b) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Arjun. (c) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Arjun.
  16. 16.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rough rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rope (b) scraped (c) rough
  17. 17.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) bored
  18. 18.Which strong verb means “threw with great force”? (a) shouted (b) hurled (c) staggered
  19. 19.Which strong verb means “walked quietly on your toes”? (a) giggled (b) soared (c) tiptoed
  20. 20.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill. (b) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus. (c) We ate rice and dal for dinner.
  21. 21.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) chirp (c) river
  22. 22.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) muttered (b) nibbled (c) dashed
  23. 23.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Aarav looked at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) staggered (b) glanced (c) soared
  24. 24.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The ducks quack noisily near the pond.”
    (a) ducks (b) quack (c) pond
  25. 25.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The old door creaked as it opened. (b) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) touch
  27. 27.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Meera.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan felt very scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  29. 29.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Vihaan kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  30. 30.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) steaming (b) filled (c) soup
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is sad? (a) Kavya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner. (b) Tears filled Kavya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Kavya was sad.
  32. 32.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) hard (c) fluffy
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  34. 34.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Can I have one more laddoo, please”? asked Imran. (b) “Can I have one more laddoo, please” asked Imran. (c) “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Imran.
  35. 35.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) sun (b) rose (c) golden
  36. 36.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The taxis honk in the busy street.”
    (a) honk (b) taxis (c) street
  37. 37.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) kind (c) meow
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little brother is a chatterbox.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is sad? (a) Neel’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists. (b) Neel was sad. (c) Neel’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  40. 40.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) okay (c) good

Answer key

  1. Joseph’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  2. Arjun froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  3. hearing
  4. blazed
  5. His heart was a drum during the race.
  6. The jalebi was as sweet as honey.
  7. “Catch the ball!” shouted Saanvi.
  8. hearing
  9. Kavya drummed her fingers and stared at the clock.
  10. foaming
  11. juicy
  12. taste
  13. sight
  14. whispered
  15. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Arjun.
  16. rough
  17. happy
  18. hurled
  19. tiptoed
  20. Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  21. chirp
  22. dashed
  23. glanced
  24. quack
  25. I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  26. touch
  27. sobbed
  28. telling
  29. showing
  30. steaming
  31. Tears filled Kavya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.
  32. hard
  33. sight
  34. “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” asked Imran.
  35. golden
  36. honk
  37. meow
  38. metaphor
  39. Neel’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  40. mysterious

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