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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 986 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Diya’s cheek.”
    (a) bored (b) cold (c) sad
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Neel. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing” sobbed Neel. (c) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Neel.
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) taste
  4. 4.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Ishaan ___ a phone number on his hand.”
    (a) scribbled (b) did (c) wrote
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) good (b) foaming (c) nice
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) I felt the cool breeze on my face.
  7. 7.Which strong verb means “walked around with no plan”? (a) blazed (b) scrubbed (c) wandered
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, the film is starting,” ___ Tenzin.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) baby (c) chubby
  10. 10.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The baby slept in the afternoon.
  11. 11.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Zoya. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Zoya. (c) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Zoya.
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The shaggy dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) shaggy (b) barked (c) dog
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) okay (c) fine
  14. 14.What makes the sound “crackle”? (a) a duck (b) a heavy bag falling (c) a campfire
  15. 15.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) a car horn (c) a dog
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) squishy
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “The two friends ran to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) scrubbed (b) raced (c) sobbed
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is bored? (a) Joseph drummed his fingers and stared at the clock. (b) Joseph was bored. (c) Joseph laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  19. 19.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Grandpa reads the newspaper every day. (b) Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers. (c) The night was as dark as ink.
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The mouse ___ the corner of the cheese.”
    (a) nibbled (b) ate (c) came
  21. 21.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Tara ___ into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) looked (b) peered (c) went
  22. 22.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The camera went ___ at the party.”
    (a) whoosh (b) click (c) meow
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) patchwork
  24. 24.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) snip (b) kind (c) mango
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Simran sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  26. 26.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Simran. (b) Where did you put my blue pencil? asked Simran. (c) “Where did you put my blue pencil”? asked Simran.
  27. 27.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) quack (b) whoosh (c) knock
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Rohan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chirp (b) slowly (c) garden
  30. 30.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is happy? (a) Kabir hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Kabir was happy. (c) Kabir sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) taste
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rough (b) okay (c) nice
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  34. 34.What makes the sound “oink”? (a) a doorbell (b) a pig (c) a horse
  35. 35.Which strong verb could replace “laughed” in this sentence?
    “The girls laughed at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) peered (b) giggled (c) strolled
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” ___ Vihaan.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fine (b) fluffy (c) nice
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is happy? (a) Arjun gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Arjun laughed, clapped and twirled around the room. (c) Arjun was happy.
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) hungry

Answer key

  1. sad
  2. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Neel.
  3. hearing
  4. scribbled
  5. foaming
  6. The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  7. wandered
  8. whispered
  9. chubby
  10. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  11. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Zoya.
  12. shaggy
  13. mysterious
  14. a campfire
  15. a dog
  16. squishy
  17. raced
  18. Joseph drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.
  19. The night was as dark as ink.
  20. nibbled
  21. peered
  22. click
  23. patchwork
  24. snip
  25. showing
  26. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Simran.
  27. knock
  28. showing
  29. chirp
  30. Kabir hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  31. smell
  32. rough
  33. sight
  34. a pig
  35. giggled
  36. giggled
  37. fluffy
  38. smell
  39. Arjun laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  40. scared

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