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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 99 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The children played cricket after school. (b) The jalebi was as sweet as honey. (c) Her bedroom is a pigsty.
  2. 2.What makes the sound “thud”? (a) raindrops (b) a rooster (c) a heavy bag falling
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “I tasted the soup and added more salt.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  4. 4.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) snip (b) ding-dong (c) buzz
  5. 5.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Rohan. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Rohan. (c) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Rohan.
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  7. 7.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chirp (b) teacher (c) window
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I have lost my favourite teddy,” ___ Dev.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  9. 9.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) Her hands were as cold as ice cubes. (c) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.
  10. 10.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) fluttered (b) staggered (c) clutched
  11. 11.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Our cat lets out a sad ___ at night.”
    (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) oink (c) meow
  12. 12.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Yash’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) sad (b) tired (c) happy
  13. 13.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a car horn (c) a dog
  14. 14.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) It rained all night in our town. (c) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  15. 15.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The river water felt icy on my feet. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  17. 17.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) brave (c) soft
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pigs oink in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) muddy (b) oink (c) pigs
  19. 19.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is bored? (a) Kavya rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (b) Kavya was bored. (c) Kavya kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  20. 20.Which strong verb could replace “laughed” in this sentence?
    “The girls laughed at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) nibbled (b) giggled (c) wandered
  21. 21.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The water was as clear as glass.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Diya’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) bored (b) cold (c) happy
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rough (b) nice (c) good
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) angry (b) tired (c) bored
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Is it time for lunch yet” asked Manav. (b) Is it time for lunch yet? asked Manav. (c) “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Manav.
  26. 26.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, stop tickling me”, giggled Sahil. (b) “Hee hee, stop tickling me” giggled Sahil. (c) “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Sahil.
  27. 27.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Come back here, Moti! shouted Sneha. (b) “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Sneha. (c) “Come back here, Moti” shouted Sneha.
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (b) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  29. 29.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Tara ___ into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) made (b) peered (c) looked
  30. 30.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “That joke is so funny,” giggled Rohan. (b) That joke is so funny, giggled Rohan. (c) “That joke is so funny”, giggled Rohan.
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) drip (b) table (c) gentle
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) muddy
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  34. 34.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) gate (b) woof (c) puppy
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (b) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (c) The medicine had a bitter taste.
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The pillow was as soft as a cloud.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  37. 37.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) pond (b) had (c) muddy
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) touch
  39. 39.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) moo (c) yellow
  40. 40.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The bees buzz around the mango flowers.”
    (a) flowers (b) buzz (c) bees

Answer key

  1. The jalebi was as sweet as honey.
  2. a heavy bag falling
  3. taste
  4. snip
  5. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Rohan.
  6. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  7. chirp
  8. sobbed
  9. Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.
  10. staggered
  11. meow
  12. sad
  13. pakoras in hot oil
  14. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  15. The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  16. The river water felt icy on my feet.
  17. brave
  18. oink
  19. Kavya kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  20. giggled
  21. simile
  22. cold
  23. rough
  24. bored
  25. “Is it time for lunch yet?” asked Manav.
  26. “Hee hee, stop tickling me,” giggled Sahil.
  27. “Come back here, Moti!” shouted Sneha.
  28. The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  29. peered
  30. “That joke is so funny,” giggled Rohan.
  31. drip
  32. muddy
  33. smell
  34. woof
  35. The medicine had a bitter taste.
  36. simile
  37. muddy
  38. taste
  39. moo
  40. buzz

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