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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 993 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is hungry? (a) Tears filled Rohan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor. (b) Rohan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (c) Rohan was hungry.
  2. 2.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Sahil. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing” sobbed Sahil. (c) “My goldfish has gone missing”, sobbed Sahil.
  3. 3.What makes the sound “sizzle”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a lion (c) a microwave
  4. 4.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) round (b) tall (c) short
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) booming
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Help, the boat is sinking! shouted Kabir. (b) “Help, the boat is sinking” shouted Kabir. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Kabir.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sneha is happy? (a) Sneha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Sneha was happy. (c) Sneha stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  8. 8.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a mouse”
    (a) huge (b) loud (c) quiet
  9. 9.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rickety ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) rickety (b) wobbled (c) ladder
  10. 10.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as ice”
    (a) hot (b) cold (c) loud
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) sight
  12. 12.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The puppy gave a happy woof at the gate.”
    (a) puppy (b) gate (c) woof
  13. 13.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The tiny ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) tiny (b) ant (c) carried
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is sad? (a) Maria was sad. (b) Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Maria sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen. (b) I tasted the soup and added more salt. (c) We heard the train whistle far away.
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The squishy cushion sank under me.”
    (a) sank (b) squishy (c) cushion
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rough rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) scraped (b) rough (c) rope
  20. 20.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) cheeky (b) good (c) nice
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) okay (b) dazzling (c) good
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) went (b) sipped (c) drank
  23. 23.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) soft (b) slow (c) brave
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Riya rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) cold
  25. 25.Which strong verb could replace “shut” in this sentence?
    “Kabir shut the door when he was cross.”
    (a) glanced (b) slammed (c) soared
  26. 26.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lemon juice tasted very sour.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) smell
  27. 27.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The night was as dark as ink.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  28. 28.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The night was as dark as ink. (b) The baby slept in the afternoon. (c) The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.
  29. 29.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The stars were diamonds in the night sky.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Nisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) happy (b) sad (c) angry
  31. 31.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the film is starting___” whispered Tara.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Vihaan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  33. 33.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Riya. (b) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Riya. (c) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Riya.
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The two friends ___ to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) raced (b) ran (c) went
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (b) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (c) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  36. 36.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is cold? (a) Saanvi was cold. (b) Saanvi rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers. (c) Saanvi’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  37. 37.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pigs oink in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) muddy (b) oink (c) pigs
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Pooja’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) hungry (b) sad (c) tired
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is angry? (a) Diya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter. (b) Diya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (c) Diya was angry.
  40. 40.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kabir rubbed his eyes and nodded off on the sofa.”
    (a) tired (b) bored (c) happy

Answer key

  1. Rohan gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  2. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Sahil.
  3. pakoras in hot oil
  4. tall
  5. booming
  6. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Kabir.
  7. Sneha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  8. quiet
  9. rickety
  10. cold
  11. sight
  12. woof
  13. Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  14. tiny
  15. Maria sat alone, hugging her knees and sniffing.
  16. I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  17. hearing
  18. squishy
  19. rough
  20. cheeky
  21. dazzling
  22. sipped
  23. brave
  24. cold
  25. slammed
  26. taste
  27. simile
  28. The night was as dark as ink.
  29. metaphor
  30. happy
  31. a comma (,)
  32. showing
  33. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Riya.
  34. raced
  35. The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  36. Saanvi rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.
  37. oink
  38. sad
  39. Diya stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  40. tired

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