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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 105 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sense does this line use?
    “The old door creaked as it opened.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  2. 2.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) rusty
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) neigh (c) gentle
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The fish market had a strong smell. (b) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (c) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.
  5. 5.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Nobody came to my party,” ___ Maria.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  6. 6.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The children jumped into the pool with a ___.”
    (a) hiss (b) splash (c) chirp
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) A whiff of incense floated from the temple.
  8. 8.Which strong verb means “cleaned by rubbing hard”? (a) whispered (b) scrubbed (c) dashed
  9. 9.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Arjun is happy? (a) Arjun hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Arjun’s cheek. (c) Arjun was happy.
  10. 10.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a balloon (c) a snake
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.”
    (a) smell (b) touch (c) taste
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) sticky
  13. 13.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “An owl gave a ___ from the banyan tree.”
    (a) sizzle (b) hoot (c) snip
  14. 14.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Rohan. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Rohan. (c) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Rohan.
  15. 15.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The moon was a silver plate in the sky.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  16. 16.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap,” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) asked (b) shouted (c) whispered
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is hungry? (a) Riya kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch. (b) Riya was hungry. (c) Riya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  18. 18.What makes the sound “knock”? (a) a lion (b) a visitor at the door (c) a duck
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) nice (b) crowded (c) fine
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is angry? (a) Joseph stamped his foot and slammed the door. (b) Joseph was angry. (c) Joseph froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) feathery (c) tickled
  22. 22.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My sandcastle got washed away,” sobbed Ishaan. (b) “My sandcastle got washed away” sobbed Ishaan. (c) My sandcastle got washed away, sobbed Ishaan.
  23. 23.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (b) The tired dog snored like a tractor. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  24. 24.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) made (b) tumbled (c) fell
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Farhan. (b) Look out, the shelf is falling! shouted Farhan. (c) “Look out, the shelf is falling” shouted Farhan.
  26. 26.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  27. 27.Which strong verb means “spoke very softly”? (a) staggered (b) whispered (c) dashed
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Farhan. (b) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Farhan. (c) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Farhan.
  29. 29.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The horse gave a neigh in the stable.”
    (a) stable (b) neigh (c) horse
  31. 31.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) tap (b) dark (c) drip
  32. 32.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) booming (b) okay (c) nice
  34. 34.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) staggered (b) crawled (c) peered
  35. 35.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Dev is angry? (a) Dev dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Dev threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (c) Dev was angry.
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “We planted a mango tree in the garden.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  37. 37.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tara laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  38. 38.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil___” asked Saanvi.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  40. 40.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet. (b) The bees buzzed around the hive. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.

Answer key

  1. hearing
  2. rusty
  3. neigh
  4. The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.
  5. sobbed
  6. splash
  7. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  8. scrubbed
  9. Arjun hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.
  10. a balloon
  11. touch
  12. sticky
  13. hoot
  14. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Rohan.
  15. metaphor
  16. whispered
  17. Riya kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  18. a visitor at the door
  19. crowded
  20. Joseph stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  21. feathery
  22. “My sandcastle got washed away,” sobbed Ishaan.
  23. The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  24. tumbled
  25. “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Farhan.
  26. metaphor
  27. whispered
  28. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Farhan.
  29. showing
  30. neigh
  31. drip
  32. simile
  33. booming
  34. peered
  35. Dev threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  36. neither
  37. showing
  38. a question mark (?)
  39. hearing
  40. The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.

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