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Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 181 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Tenzin. (b) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Tenzin. (c) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Tenzin.
  2. 2.Which strong verb could replace “ate” in this sentence?
    “The hungry boy ate all the samosas in a minute.”
    (a) shouted (b) wandered (c) gobbled
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is angry? (a) Manav hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (b) Manav threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!” (c) Manav was angry.
  4. 4.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is cold? (a) Saanvi shivered and stamped her feet in the snow. (b) Saanvi was cold. (c) Saanvi kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  5. 5.Which sense does this line use?
    “The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) sight
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  7. 7.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) whoosh (b) trees (c) wind
  8. 8.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (c) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  9. 9.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (b) The medicine had a bitter taste. (c) The bees buzzed around the hive.
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I saw a rainbow over the green fields. (b) The pressure cooker hissed three times. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  11. 11.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The rooster crowed cock-a-doodle-doo at dawn.”
    (a) rooster (b) cock-a-doodle-doo (c) dawn
  12. 12.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) touch
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  14. 14.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “I bit the crisp papad with a crunch.”
    (a) papad (b) crisp (c) crunch
  15. 15.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) soft (b) muddy (c) clear
  16. 16.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) The road was as straight as a ruler. (c) Kabir finished his homework early.
  17. 17.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The camera went ___ at the party.”
    (a) pop (b) click (c) achoo
  18. 18.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The old clock went ___ in the hall.”
    (a) oink (b) pop (c) tick-tock
  19. 19.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) bitter (b) sweet (c) sour
  20. 20.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The playground was an oven in May. (b) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (c) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  21. 21.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Why is the sky blue?” ___ Neel.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  22. 22.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is bored? (a) Priya sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Priya was bored. (c) Priya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  23. 23.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The fog was a grey curtain over the town.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  24. 24.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was really scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “I saw a rainbow over the green fields.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) sight
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) tumbled (b) crept (c) slammed
  27. 27.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The puppy’s nose was as cold as ice. (b) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (c) The cat sat on the warm mat.
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Joseph. (b) Stop that runaway goat! shouted Joseph. (c) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Joseph.
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  30. 30.Which sense does this line use?
    “We watched the peacock open its blue tail.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) hearing
  31. 31.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “Grandpa walked through the park after dinner.”
    (a) whispered (b) strolled (c) muttered
  32. 32.What makes the sound “beep”? (a) a microwave (b) a jump into a pool (c) a steel plate falling
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) feathery
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Nisha is bored? (a) Nisha was bored. (b) Nisha hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Nisha counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  35. 35.Which word fits the gap best?
    “I dropped my ice cream in the mud,” ___ Pooja.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Where did you put my blue pencil”? asked Ishaan. (b) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Ishaan. (c) Where did you put my blue pencil? asked Ishaan.
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ishaan drummed his fingers and stared at the clock.”
    (a) bored (b) tired (c) sad
  38. 38.Which sentence is a simile? (a) It rained all night in our town. (b) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (c) Her smile was as bright as the sun.
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “A tear rolled slowly down Joseph’s cheek.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  40. 40.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Pooja.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)

Answer key

  1. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Tenzin.
  2. gobbled
  3. Manav threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  4. Saanvi shivered and stamped her feet in the snow.
  5. taste
  6. sight
  7. whoosh
  8. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  9. The bees buzzed around the hive.
  10. The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  11. cock-a-doodle-doo
  12. touch
  13. smell
  14. crunch
  15. clear
  16. The road was as straight as a ruler.
  17. click
  18. tick-tock
  19. sweet
  20. The playground was an oven in May.
  21. asked
  22. Priya sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  23. metaphor
  24. telling
  25. sight
  26. crept
  27. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  28. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Joseph.
  29. taste
  30. sight
  31. strolled
  32. a microwave
  33. feathery
  34. Nisha counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  35. sobbed
  36. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Ishaan.
  37. bored
  38. Her smile was as bright as the sun.
  39. showing
  40. a comma (,)

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