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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 182 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My goldfish has gone missing,” ___ Tara.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  2. 2.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard waves crashing on the rocks.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) hearing
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Tara ___ into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) peered (b) came (c) looked
  4. 4.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) quack (c) happy
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rough rope scraped my hands.”
    (a) rope (b) rough (c) scraped
  6. 6.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus. (b) The children played cricket after school. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  7. 7.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is angry? (a) Meera stamped her foot and slammed the door. (b) Tears filled Meera’s eyes, and she stared at the floor. (c) Meera was angry.
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is hungry? (a) Aarav’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (b) Aarav licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (c) Aarav was hungry.
  9. 9.What makes the sound “thud”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) a sheep (c) pakoras in hot oil
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (b) The sea tasted very salty. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  11. 11.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Shh, we are in the library,” ___ Farhan.
    (a) shouted (b) whispered (c) asked
  12. 12.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Look out, the shelf is falling!” ___ Manav.
    (a) shouted (b) giggled (c) whispered
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing”, sobbed Manav. (b) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Manav. (c) “My goldfish has gone missing” sobbed Manav.
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) teacher (b) happy (c) sizzle
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) nice (b) okay (c) juicy
  17. 17.What makes the sound “hiss”? (a) a duck (b) a snake (c) a cow
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ monkey stole Grandpa’s cap.”
    (a) good (b) cheeky (c) nice
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) pond (b) had (c) muddy
  20. 20.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandma ___ her hot tea slowly.”
    (a) went (b) sipped (c) drank
  21. 21.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight
  22. 22.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The medicine had a bitter taste. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.
  23. 23.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Hee hee, that clown has a red nose, giggled Aarav. (b) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose” giggled Aarav. (c) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Aarav.
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) okay (b) spiky (c) nice
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Nisha’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  26. 26.What makes the sound “chirp”? (a) a sparrow (b) a pair of scissors (c) a motorbike
  27. 27.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The bees buzzed around the hive. (b) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (c) The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs. (c) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Priya. (b) Run, the bus is leaving! shouted Priya. (c) “Run, the bus is leaving”! shouted Priya.
  30. 30.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Nobody came to my party___” sobbed Dev.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  31. 31.Which sense does this line use?
    “The pressure cooker hissed three times.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  32. 32.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The dog barked at the postman. (b) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (c) The playground was an oven in May.
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gigantic tree towered over the house.”
    (a) towered (b) gigantic (c) tree
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) window (b) table (c) knock
  35. 35.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) croak (b) hiss (c) sizzle
  36. 36.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) dripped (b) sticky (c) jalebis
  37. 37.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) cold
  38. 38.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) fine (b) squishy (c) nice
  39. 39.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “A butterfly flew from flower to flower.”
    (a) fluttered (b) trudged (c) hurled
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is sad? (a) Imran gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (b) Imran was sad. (c) Imran’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.

Answer key

  1. sobbed
  2. hearing
  3. peered
  4. quack
  5. rough
  6. Kabir ran like the wind to catch the bus.
  7. Meera stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  8. Aarav licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.
  9. a heavy bag falling
  10. I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  11. whispered
  12. shouted
  13. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Manav.
  14. sizzle
  15. hearing
  16. juicy
  17. a snake
  18. cheeky
  19. muddy
  20. sipped
  21. sight
  22. The medicine had a bitter taste.
  23. “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Aarav.
  24. spiky
  25. showing
  26. a sparrow
  27. The bees buzzed around the hive.
  28. The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.
  29. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Priya.
  30. a comma (,)
  31. hearing
  32. The playground was an oven in May.
  33. gigantic
  34. knock
  35. hiss
  36. sticky
  37. hungry
  38. squishy
  39. fluttered
  40. Imran’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.

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