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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 373 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is tired? (a) Rohan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) Rohan was tired. (c) Rohan counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  2. 2.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The raindrops went pitter-patter on the roof.”
    (a) pitter-patter (b) roof (c) raindrops
  3. 3.Which sense does this line use?
    “The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) touch
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The muddy pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) pond (b) muddy (c) had
  5. 5.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  7. 7.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.”
    (a) scared (b) hungry (c) sad
  8. 8.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, the baby is sleeping___” whispered Kabir.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  9. 9.Which strong verb could replace “cleaned” in this sentence?
    “Mum cleaned the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) whispered (b) grabbed (c) scrubbed
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) sticky
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  12. 12.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) table (b) crunch (c) quickly
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) taste
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  15. 15.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dad ___ the keys onto the table.”
    (a) got (b) threw (c) tossed
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “The jalebi tasted sweet and syrupy.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) taste
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) cleaned (b) made (c) scrubbed
  18. 18.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is scared? (a) Joseph was scared. (b) Joseph froze and held his breath as the floor creaked. (c) Joseph’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  19. 19.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The cow gave a long ___ from the shed.”
    (a) pop (b) boom (c) moo
  20. 20.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Meera watered the plants in the morning.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is bored? (a) Tenzin was bored. (b) Tenzin hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Tenzin kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  22. 22.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) soared (b) flew (c) got
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) smell
  24. 24.Which strong verb means “flapped its wings quickly and lightly”? (a) scrubbed (b) fluttered (c) dashed
  25. 25.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Do not tell anyone about the party, whispered Pooja. (b) “Do not tell anyone about the party,” whispered Pooja. (c) “Do not tell anyone about the party”, whispered Pooja.
  26. 26.Which strong verb means “moved on hands and knees”? (a) sprinkled (b) crawled (c) peered
  27. 27.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Aarav ___ at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) looked (b) glanced (c) got
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Pooja. (b) “Stop that runaway goat” shouted Pooja. (c) “Stop that runaway goat”! shouted Pooja.
  30. 30.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Who painted this lovely picture”? asked Aarav. (b) Who painted this lovely picture? asked Aarav. (c) “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Aarav.
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  32. 32.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) scared
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Priya is angry? (a) Priya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (b) Priya’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (c) Priya was angry.
  34. 34.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Priya was scared.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  36. 36.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) telling (b) showing
  37. 37.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Kabir.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) smell
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Who painted this lovely picture___” asked Manav.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Vihaan is happy? (a) Vihaan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (b) Vihaan was happy. (c) Vihaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.

Answer key

  1. Rohan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.
  2. pitter-patter
  3. taste
  4. muddy
  5. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  6. smell
  7. sad
  8. a comma (,)
  9. scrubbed
  10. sticky
  11. The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  12. crunch
  13. taste
  14. smell
  15. tossed
  16. taste
  17. scrubbed
  18. Joseph froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  19. moo
  20. neither
  21. Tenzin kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.
  22. soared
  23. sight
  24. fluttered
  25. “Do not tell anyone about the party,” whispered Pooja.
  26. crawled
  27. glanced
  28. showing
  29. “Stop that runaway goat!” shouted Pooja.
  30. “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Aarav.
  31. I looked at the white peak of the mountain.
  32. hungry
  33. Priya stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  34. telling
  35. taste
  36. showing
  37. a question mark (?)
  38. sight
  39. a question mark (?)
  40. Vihaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.

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