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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 379 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is angry? (a) Riya was angry. (b) Riya stamped her foot and slammed the door. (c) Riya froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.
  2. 2.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Neel sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) scared (b) bored (c) angry
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) quack (c) tall
  4. 4.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  5. 5.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Joseph’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  6. 6.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) knock (b) drip (c) snip
  7. 7.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The thunder went boom over the hills.”
    (a) hills (b) thunder (c) boom
  8. 8.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) drank (b) slurp (c) lassi
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fine (b) fluffy (c) nice
  10. 10.What makes the sound “chirp”? (a) a sparrow (b) thunder (c) a noisy drinker
  11. 11.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a ___.”
    (a) roar (b) thud (c) sizzle
  12. 12.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Fatima threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) scared
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The oranges ___ out of the bag and down the steps.”
    (a) made (b) tumbled (c) fell
  14. 14.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Sneha.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  15. 15.Which strong verb means “wrote quickly and untidily”? (a) scribbled (b) glanced (c) raced
  16. 16.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (b) I felt the cool breeze on my face. (c) Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.
  17. 17.What makes the sound “clang”? (a) a sneeze (b) a steel plate falling (c) a leaking tap
  18. 18.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Mum spoke softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) dashed (b) nibbled (c) whispered
  19. 19.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Is it time for lunch yet?” ___ Ananya.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The golden sand glittered in the sun.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  21. 21.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists.”
    (a) cold (b) angry (c) happy
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) happy (b) scared (c) sad
  23. 23.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) table (c) honk
  24. 24.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (b) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (c) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake was a mirror for the mountains.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  26. 26.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (b) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  27. 27.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Help, the boat is sinking___” shouted Imran.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a question mark (?)
  28. 28.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The children chattered like a flock of parrots. (b) The baby slept in the afternoon. (c) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.
  29. 29.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Farhan. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Farhan. (c) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Farhan.
  30. 30.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “A butterfly flew from flower to flower.”
    (a) stared (b) wandered (c) fluttered
  31. 31.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) My kite is torn to pieces, sobbed Priya. (b) “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Priya. (c) “My kite is torn to pieces” sobbed Priya.
  32. 32.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The gloomy cave echoed with our voices.”
    (a) cave (b) echoed (c) gloomy
  33. 33.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Fatima froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  34. 34.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) river (b) hiss (c) green
  35. 35.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (b) The thunder crashed and roared. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  36. 36.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) hearing
  37. 37.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) sobbed (b) stared (c) gobbled
  38. 38.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) short (b) round (c) tall
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is angry? (a) Imran was angry. (b) Imran could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Imran stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  40. 40.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a rock”
    (a) soft (b) fluffy (c) hard

Answer key

  1. Riya stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  2. bored
  3. quack
  4. asked
  5. showing
  6. knock
  7. boom
  8. slurp
  9. fluffy
  10. a sparrow
  11. thud
  12. angry
  13. tumbled
  14. asked
  15. scribbled
  16. I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.
  17. a steel plate falling
  18. whispered
  19. asked
  20. sight
  21. angry
  22. sad
  23. honk
  24. The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.
  25. metaphor
  26. The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  27. an exclamation mark (!)
  28. Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.
  29. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Farhan.
  30. fluttered
  31. “My kite is torn to pieces,” sobbed Priya.
  32. gloomy
  33. showing
  34. hiss
  35. The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  36. sight
  37. stared
  38. tall
  39. Imran stamped his foot and slammed the door.
  40. hard

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