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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 39 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) okay (b) mysterious (c) fine
  2. 2.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My best friend is moving away,” ___ Aisha.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  3. 3.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The stars were diamonds in the night sky.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  4. 4.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The lake was a mirror for the mountains. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The pillow was as soft as a cloud.
  5. 5.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ car zoomed past us.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) sleek
  6. 6.What makes the sound “neigh”? (a) a horse (b) a crisp papad (c) a pig
  7. 7.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) humble (b) shy (c) proud
  8. 8.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Vihaan is sad? (a) Vihaan dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (b) A tear rolled slowly down Vihaan’s cheek. (c) Vihaan was sad.
  9. 9.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The balloon burst with a ___.”
    (a) click (b) pop (c) vroom
  10. 10.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) scared
  11. 11.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) walked (b) came (c) strolled
  12. 12.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) round (b) tall (c) short
  13. 13.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Mum spoke softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) soared (b) scrubbed (c) whispered
  14. 14.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Stop that runaway goat___” shouted Ananya.
    (a) an exclamation mark (!) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  15. 15.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Help, the boat is sinking!” ___ Kavya.
    (a) giggled (b) whispered (c) shouted
  16. 16.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) window (c) pop
  17. 17.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) pencil (c) baa
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “I bit the crisp papad with a crunch.”
    (a) papad (b) crisp (c) crunch
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya was sad.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  20. 20.Which word fits the gap best?
    “May I borrow your eraser?” ___ Dev.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  21. 21.Which strong verb means “shut hard and loudly”? (a) fluttered (b) slammed (c) giggled
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) leapt (b) stared (c) scribbled
  23. 23.Which strong verb means “walked in a slow, relaxed way”? (a) gulped (b) strolled (c) nibbled
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “A whistle blew at the start of the race.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) sight
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The train left the station at nine.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  26. 26.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (b) The jalebi was as sweet as honey. (c) The bus stopped at the school gate.
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The blooming garden smelled of roses.”
    (a) garden (b) blooming (c) smelled
  28. 28.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil?” ___ Farhan.
    (a) sobbed (b) giggled (c) asked
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Rohan is tired? (a) Rohan was tired. (b) Rohan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner. (c) Rohan’s teeth chattered, and he pulled his shawl tighter.
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sour (b) sweet (c) bitter
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is bored? (a) Maria was bored. (b) Maria sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (c) Maria grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  32. 32.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Zoya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria rubbed her hands and blew on her fingers.”
    (a) happy (b) hungry (c) cold
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) naughty
  35. 35.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) booming (b) nice (c) good
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) I have lost my favourite teddy, sobbed Imran. (b) “I have lost my favourite teddy”, sobbed Imran. (c) “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Imran.
  37. 37.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “The bowler threw the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) gulped (b) hurled (c) sipped
  38. 38.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) drip (b) dark (c) tap
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Joseph is bored? (a) Joseph sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Joseph was bored. (c) Joseph threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!”
  40. 40.Which strong verb means “flew high in the sky”? (a) shouted (b) soared (c) sipped

Answer key

  1. mysterious
  2. sobbed
  3. metaphor
  4. The lake was a mirror for the mountains.
  5. sleek
  6. a horse
  7. proud
  8. A tear rolled slowly down Vihaan’s cheek.
  9. pop
  10. cold
  11. strolled
  12. tall
  13. whispered
  14. an exclamation mark (!)
  15. shouted
  16. pop
  17. baa
  18. crunch
  19. telling
  20. asked
  21. slammed
  22. stared
  23. strolled
  24. hearing
  25. neither
  26. The stars were diamonds in the night sky.
  27. blooming
  28. asked
  29. Rohan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.
  30. sweet
  31. Maria sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  32. showing
  33. cold
  34. naughty
  35. booming
  36. “I have lost my favourite teddy,” sobbed Imran.
  37. hurled
  38. drip
  39. Joseph sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  40. soared

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