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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 424 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ river rushed over the rocks.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) foaming
  2. 2.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Manav hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) tired (b) angry (c) happy
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) quickly (c) ding-dong
  4. 4.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “The eagle flew above the hills.”
    (a) staggered (b) soared (c) glanced
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The enormous elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) enormous (b) elephant (c) stomped
  6. 6.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The fireworks burst like giant flowers.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  7. 7.What makes the sound “buzz”? (a) a bee (b) a frog (c) the wind
  8. 8.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Why is the sky blue?” ___ Zoya.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  9. 9.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Kabir.
    (a) giggled (b) sobbed (c) asked
  10. 10.Which sense does this line use?
    “The tree bark felt rough under my fingers.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) taste
  11. 11.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) smell (b) taste (c) sight
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The striped snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) striped (b) slid (c) snake
  13. 13.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The doorbell went ding-dong at noon.”
    (a) noon (b) ding-dong (c) doorbell
  14. 14.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The mysterious parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) mysterious (b) parcel (c) arrived
  15. 15.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) okay (b) good (c) muddy
  16. 16.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) okay (b) squishy (c) nice
  17. 17.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Neel is hungry? (a) Neel was hungry. (b) Neel’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Neel’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again.
  18. 18.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Meera gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.”
    (a) sad (b) hungry (c) tired
  19. 19.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) sight
  20. 20.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a feather”
    (a) dark (b) light (c) heavy
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sour lemon made Riya pull a face.”
    (a) lemon (b) sour (c) pull
  22. 22.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Fatima sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) hungry (b) tired (c) bored
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bitter gourd tasted bitter.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  24. 24.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The old car was a tired donkey on the hill.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  25. 25.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) soft (b) brave (c) slow
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The eagle ___ above the hills.”
    (a) soared (b) flew (c) made
  27. 27.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) dashed (b) peered (c) slammed
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat” giggled Arjun. (b) Ha ha, the goat ate your hat, giggled Arjun. (c) “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Arjun.
  29. 29.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Imran is angry? (a) Imran’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists. (b) Imran’s knees shook, and he hid behind the door. (c) Imran was angry.
  30. 30.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The ducks ___ noisily near the pond.”
    (a) drip (b) quack (c) achoo
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) green (c) beep
  32. 32.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The moon was a silver plate in the sky.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  33. 33.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Tenzin is happy? (a) Tenzin’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet. (b) Tenzin was happy. (c) Tenzin laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  34. 34.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My sandcastle got washed away___” sobbed Rohan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) smell
  36. 36.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The bus stopped at the school gate.”
    (a) metaphor (b) simile (c) neither
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is cold? (a) Aarav’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (b) Aarav was cold. (c) Aarav’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  38. 38.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Run, the bus is leaving!” ___ Dev.
    (a) whispered (b) giggled (c) shouted
  39. 39.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The busy market was a beehive.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “May I borrow your eraser”? asked Vihaan. (b) “May I borrow your eraser” asked Vihaan. (c) “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Vihaan.

Answer key

  1. foaming
  2. happy
  3. ding-dong
  4. soared
  5. enormous
  6. simile
  7. a bee
  8. asked
  9. asked
  10. touch
  11. sight
  12. striped
  13. ding-dong
  14. mysterious
  15. muddy
  16. squishy
  17. Neel’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  18. hungry
  19. sight
  20. light
  21. sour
  22. bored
  23. taste
  24. metaphor
  25. brave
  26. soared
  27. peered
  28. “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” giggled Arjun.
  29. Imran’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.
  30. quack
  31. beep
  32. metaphor
  33. Tenzin laughed, clapped and twirled around the room.
  34. a comma (,)
  35. sight
  36. neither
  37. Aarav’s nose turned pink, and he pulled on a woolly cap.
  38. shouted
  39. metaphor
  40. “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Vihaan.

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