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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 433 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The dry logs crackle in the campfire.”
    (a) logs (b) dry (c) crackle
  2. 2.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Dad’s voice boomed like thunder. (b) It rained all night in our town. (c) His heart was a drum during the race.
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) chirp (c) gentle
  4. 4.Which sense does this line use?
    “Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.”
    (a) taste (b) smell (c) touch
  5. 5.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The rusty bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) bus (b) rusty (c) rattled
  6. 6.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Meera. (b) My goldfish has gone missing, sobbed Meera. (c) “My goldfish has gone missing”, sobbed Meera.
  7. 7.Which strong verb could replace “drank” in this sentence?
    “After the race, Kabir drank a whole bottle of water.”
    (a) tossed (b) gulped (c) scrubbed
  8. 8.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The golden sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) golden (b) rose (c) sun
  9. 9.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The taxis honk in the busy street.”
    (a) honk (b) taxis (c) street
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) okay (b) narrow (c) good
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (b) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (c) The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  12. 12.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) striped
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose”, giggled Kabir. (b) “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Kabir. (c) Hee hee, that clown has a red nose, giggled Kabir.
  14. 14.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) shouted (b) spoke (c) came
  15. 15.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake, whispered Joseph. (b) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake” whispered Joseph. (c) “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Joseph.
  16. 16.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria sighed and flipped through the same comic again.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) bored
  17. 17.What makes the sound “thud”? (a) pakoras in hot oil (b) a sheep (c) a heavy bag falling
  18. 18.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) The new bicycle shone bright red. (b) The tree bark felt rough under my fingers. (c) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) feathery (c) tickled
  20. 20.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kabir is scared? (a) Kabir’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home. (b) Kabir was scared. (c) Kabir froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) polished (b) fine (c) nice
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “Meera ran to the bus stop before it left.”
    (a) scrubbed (b) gulped (c) dashed
  23. 23.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “I bit the crisp papad with a crunch.”
    (a) papad (b) crunch (c) crisp
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.”
    (a) taste (b) hearing (c) smell
  25. 25.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (b) I looked at the white peak of the mountain. (c) The temple bells rang out loudly.
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Kabir ___ the door when he was cross.”
    (a) came (b) shut (c) slammed
  27. 27.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “The tired runner walked over the finish line.”
    (a) tumbled (b) blazed (c) staggered
  28. 28.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Diya ___ her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) got (b) held (c) clutched
  29. 29.Which strong verb means “walked around with no plan”? (a) gulped (b) nibbled (c) wandered
  30. 30.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  31. 31.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Saanvi.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  32. 32.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) croak (c) slowly
  33. 33.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) nice (b) sleepy (c) fine
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Simran is scared? (a) Simran was scared. (b) Simran’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class. (c) Simran’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  35. 35.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The moon was a silver plate in the sky. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) The runner was as quick as lightning.
  36. 36.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The thunder went ___ over the hills.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) boom (c) tick-tock
  37. 37.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) sweet (b) bitter (c) sour
  38. 38.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) pencil (b) woof (c) yellow
  39. 39.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) fluttered (b) crept (c) grabbed
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Diya. (b) Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet, giggled Diya. (c) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet”, giggled Diya.

Answer key

  1. crackle
  2. His heart was a drum during the race.
  3. chirp
  4. smell
  5. rusty
  6. “My goldfish has gone missing,” sobbed Meera.
  7. gulped
  8. golden
  9. honk
  10. narrow
  11. The lemon juice tasted very sour.
  12. striped
  13. “Hee hee, that clown has a red nose,” giggled Kabir.
  14. shouted
  15. “Tiptoe so the tiger does not wake,” whispered Joseph.
  16. bored
  17. a heavy bag falling
  18. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  19. feathery
  20. Kabir froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  21. polished
  22. dashed
  23. crunch
  24. hearing
  25. I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  26. slammed
  27. staggered
  28. clutched
  29. wandered
  30. Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.
  31. asked
  32. croak
  33. sleepy
  34. Simran’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  35. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  36. boom
  37. sweet
  38. woof
  39. crept
  40. “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Diya.

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