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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 485 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as snow”
    (a) black (b) white (c) noisy
  2. 2.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat___” giggled Kabir.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  3. 3.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev was tired.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The ripe mango tasted wonderfully sweet. (b) The lake sparkled under the full moon. (c) The fish market had a strong smell.
  5. 5.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The camera went ___ at the party.”
    (a) neigh (b) click (c) hoot
  6. 6.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a peacock”
    (a) humble (b) shy (c) proud
  7. 7.What makes the sound “snip”? (a) a sneeze (b) a cat (c) a pair of scissors
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kavya licked her lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) had (b) shouted (c) spoke
  10. 10.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet”, giggled Sahil. (b) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet” giggled Sahil. (c) “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Sahil.
  11. 11.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  12. 12.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Aryan stamped his foot and slammed the door.”
    (a) bored (b) sad (c) angry
  13. 13.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Watch out for that car___” shouted Farhan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) an exclamation mark (!) (c) a question mark (?)
  14. 14.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pebbles sparkled in the stream.”
    (a) shiny (b) nice (c) good
  15. 15.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kabir rubbed his hands and blew on his fingers.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  16. 16.Which sense does this line use?
    “I looked at the white peak of the mountain.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Farhan’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “A butterfly ___ from flower to flower.”
    (a) flew (b) fluttered (c) got
  19. 19.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The rooster crowed ___ at dawn.”
    (a) woof (b) beep (c) cock-a-doodle-doo
  20. 20.Which strong verb means “looked closely at something hard to see”? (a) peered (b) fluttered (c) scribbled
  21. 21.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The narrow road twisted up the mountain.”
    (a) road (b) twisted (c) narrow
  22. 22.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) jalebis (b) sticky (c) dripped
  23. 23.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Maria is hungry? (a) Maria was hungry. (b) Maria dragged her feet upstairs and flopped on the bed. (c) Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  24. 24.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bowler ___ the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) went (b) hurled (c) threw
  25. 25.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Kabir finished his homework early.”
    (a) metaphor (b) neither (c) simile
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Yash’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.”
    (a) scared (b) hungry (c) happy
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The juicy mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) filled (b) juicy (c) mangoes
  28. 28.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I heard waves crashing on the rocks. (b) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (c) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  29. 29.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) tossed (b) nibbled (c) muttered
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) booming (b) good (c) nice
  31. 31.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Shh, Grandpa is taking a nap___” whispered Neel.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck. (b) The old door creaked as it opened. (c) The lemon pickle tasted salty and sour.
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) bored (b) scared (c) cold
  34. 34.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The doorbell went ___ at noon.”
    (a) buzz (b) ding-dong (c) roar
  35. 35.Which sentence is a simile? (a) My father bought a new umbrella. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The sun was a golden ball of fire.
  36. 36.What makes the sound “whoosh”? (a) a car horn (b) a cat (c) the wind
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) fine (c) okay
  38. 38.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sea tasted very salty.”
    (a) hearing (b) touch (c) taste
  39. 39.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The mint chutney tasted sour and salty. (b) The fragrance of roses drifted through the window. (c) The crowd cheered loudly for our team.
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “The fragrance of roses drifted through the window.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight

Answer key

  1. white
  2. a comma (,)
  3. telling
  4. The fish market had a strong smell.
  5. click
  6. proud
  7. a pair of scissors
  8. showing
  9. shouted
  10. “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” giggled Sahil.
  11. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  12. angry
  13. an exclamation mark (!)
  14. shiny
  15. showing
  16. sight
  17. showing
  18. fluttered
  19. cock-a-doodle-doo
  20. peered
  21. narrow
  22. sticky
  23. Maria’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  24. hurled
  25. neither
  26. hungry
  27. juicy
  28. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  29. tossed
  30. booming
  31. a comma (,)
  32. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  33. scared
  34. ding-dong
  35. The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  36. the wind
  37. fluffy
  38. taste
  39. The mint chutney tasted sour and salty.
  40. smell

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