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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 602 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) knock (b) hiss (c) beep
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The scissors went ___ as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) hiss (b) beep (c) snip
  3. 3.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “The coach spoke to us from across the big field.”
    (a) shouted (b) sipped (c) staggered
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleek car zoomed past us.”
    (a) sleek (b) car (c) zoomed
  5. 5.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the baby is sleeping, whispered Diya. (b) “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Diya. (c) “Shh, the baby is sleeping”, whispered Diya.
  6. 6.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) quack (c) quickly
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bees buzzed around the hive.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  8. 8.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) got (b) cleaned (c) scrubbed
  9. 9.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The clouds were cotton balls in the sky. (b) The bus stopped at the school gate. (c) The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  10. 10.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The pakoras sizzle in the hot oil.”
    (a) sizzle (b) pakoras (c) oil
  11. 11.Which strong verb could replace “burned” in this sentence?
    “The bonfire burned on Lohri night.”
    (a) staggered (b) leapt (c) blazed
  12. 12.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as grass”
    (a) green (b) loud (c) red
  13. 13.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dev ___ past his sleeping baby sister.”
    (a) tiptoed (b) walked (c) did
  14. 14.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) slowly (b) table (c) woof
  15. 15.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The puppy gave a happy ___ at the gate.”
    (a) quack (b) woof (c) sizzle
  16. 16.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as an owl”
    (a) silly (b) foolish (c) wise
  17. 17.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) May I borrow your eraser? asked Rohan. (b) “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Rohan. (c) “May I borrow your eraser” asked Rohan.
  18. 18.Which strong verb means “ran very fast”? (a) clutched (b) dashed (c) grabbed
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Kavya was angry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Which sense does this line use?
    “The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) smell
  21. 21.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a pancake”
    (a) flat (b) round (c) tall
  22. 22.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Farhan. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Farhan. (c) “Shh, the film is starting” whispered Farhan.
  23. 23.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) hungry (b) happy (c) tired
  24. 24.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) sizzle (b) honk (c) slurp
  25. 25.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) wind (b) icy (c) howled
  26. 26.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ sun rose over the hills.”
    (a) golden (b) nice (c) good
  27. 27.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) fine (b) striped (c) nice
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) taste
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) touch (b) sight (c) smell
  30. 30.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) fine (b) spiky (c) good
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (c) The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  32. 32.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ladder wobbled under Dad’s feet.”
    (a) okay (b) nice (c) rickety
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Diya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) tired (b) angry (c) sad
  34. 34.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Zoya is scared? (a) Zoya was scared. (b) Zoya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (c) Zoya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  35. 35.Which strong verb means “threw with great force”? (a) peered (b) strolled (c) hurled
  36. 36.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek. (b) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (c) The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is bored? (a) Saanvi’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (b) Saanvi counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time. (c) Saanvi was bored.
  38. 38.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) My little brother is a chatterbox.
  39. 39.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya was bored.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  40. 40.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Ananya was sad.”
    (a) showing (b) telling

Answer key

  1. hiss
  2. snip
  3. shouted
  4. sleek
  5. “Shh, the baby is sleeping,” whispered Diya.
  6. quack
  7. hearing
  8. scrubbed
  9. The children chattered like a flock of parrots.
  10. sizzle
  11. blazed
  12. green
  13. tiptoed
  14. woof
  15. woof
  16. wise
  17. “May I borrow your eraser?” asked Rohan.
  18. dashed
  19. telling
  20. touch
  21. flat
  22. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Farhan.
  23. happy
  24. slurp
  25. icy
  26. golden
  27. striped
  28. touch
  29. touch
  30. spiky
  31. The cactus was prickly when I touched it.
  32. rickety
  33. sad
  34. Zoya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door.
  35. hurled
  36. The silk sari felt smooth against my cheek.
  37. Saanvi counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.
  38. Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  39. telling
  40. telling

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