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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 680 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The snake gave an angry ___ and slid away.”
    (a) woof (b) baa (c) hiss
  2. 2.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The traffic jam was a long metal snake.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Meera watered the plants in the morning. (b) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (c) The fireworks burst like giant flowers.
  4. 4.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The children played cricket after school. (b) My little brother is a chatterbox. (c) The feather was as light as air.
  5. 5.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The old clock went tick-tock in the hall.”
    (a) hall (b) tick-tock (c) clock
  6. 6.Which sense does this line use?
    “The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  7. 7.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The camera went click at the party.”
    (a) click (b) camera (c) party
  8. 8.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ quilt covered the bed.”
    (a) okay (b) patchwork (c) good
  9. 9.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) silent (b) lazy (c) busy
  10. 10.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “His heart was a drum during the race.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  11. 11.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The frogs croak all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) frogs (b) monsoon (c) croak
  12. 12.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is tired? (a) Riya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Riya was tired. (c) Riya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  13. 13.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The motorbike went vroom down the road.”
    (a) motorbike (b) road (c) vroom
  14. 14.Which strong verb means “moved very fast to win”? (a) tossed (b) raced (c) clutched
  15. 15.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) taste
  16. 16.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “We heard a loud ___ at the front door.”
    (a) knock (b) chirp (c) honk
  17. 17.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) touch
  18. 18.Which sentence is a simile? (a) We planted a mango tree in the garden. (b) The jalebi was as sweet as honey. (c) The traffic jam was a long metal snake.
  19. 19.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Look out, the shelf is falling” shouted Saanvi. (b) Look out, the shelf is falling! shouted Saanvi. (c) “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Saanvi.
  20. 20.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash was hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  21. 21.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the exam has begun” whispered Kabir. (b) “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Kabir. (c) “Shh, the exam has begun”, whispered Kabir.
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The baby slept like a log. (b) The river was a silver ribbon in the valley. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  23. 23.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) My little brother is a chatterbox. (b) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun. (c) The children played cricket after school.
  24. 24.Which strong verb means “spoke very loudly”? (a) shouted (b) raced (c) crept
  25. 25.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) cuddly (b) nice (c) fine
  26. 26.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “Tara looked into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) peered (b) scrubbed (c) blazed
  27. 27.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The wind went whoosh through the trees.”
    (a) wind (b) whoosh (c) trees
  28. 28.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) hearing (b) taste (c) smell
  29. 29.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  30. 30.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Kavya folded her arms and glared at her brother.”
    (a) tired (b) angry (c) sad
  31. 31.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) nice (b) good (c) booming
  32. 32.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Mum ___ the muddy floor until it shone.”
    (a) made (b) scrubbed (c) cleaned
  33. 33.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a ___.”
    (a) thud (b) croak (c) achoo
  34. 34.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of toast drifted up the stairs.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) touch
  35. 35.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The traffic jam was a long metal snake. (b) The elephant moved like a slow grey hill. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  36. 36.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The ducks quack noisily near the pond.”
    (a) pond (b) ducks (c) quack
  37. 37.What makes the sound “quack”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a sheep (c) a duck
  38. 38.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) rusty (b) nice (c) good
  39. 39.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The mysterious parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) parcel (b) mysterious (c) arrived
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is tired? (a) Manav was tired. (b) Manav licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in. (c) Manav dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.

Answer key

  1. hiss
  2. metaphor
  3. The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  4. The feather was as light as air.
  5. tick-tock
  6. sight
  7. click
  8. patchwork
  9. busy
  10. metaphor
  11. croak
  12. Riya could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.
  13. vroom
  14. raced
  15. hearing
  16. knock
  17. smell
  18. The jalebi was as sweet as honey.
  19. “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Saanvi.
  20. telling
  21. “Shh, the exam has begun,” whispered Kabir.
  22. The river was a silver ribbon in the valley.
  23. My little brother is a chatterbox.
  24. shouted
  25. cuddly
  26. peered
  27. whoosh
  28. smell
  29. showing
  30. angry
  31. booming
  32. scrubbed
  33. thud
  34. smell
  35. The elephant moved like a slow grey hill.
  36. quack
  37. a duck
  38. rusty
  39. mysterious
  40. Manav dragged his feet upstairs and flopped on the bed.

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