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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 681 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) I heard the koel singing in the mango tree. (b) Colourful kites dotted the blue sky. (c) The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  2. 2.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The dry logs ___ in the campfire.”
    (a) beep (b) crackle (c) ding-dong
  3. 3.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, your shoes are on the wrong feet,” ___ Ishaan.
    (a) sobbed (b) asked (c) giggled
  4. 4.Which strong verb means “took tiny little bites”? (a) raced (b) scrubbed (c) nibbled
  5. 5.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Dad’s voice boomed like thunder.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Manav’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.”
    (a) sad (b) bored (c) angry
  7. 7.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) hearing
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tenzin sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  9. 9.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) went (b) trudged (c) walked
  10. 10.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark. (b) The glue felt sticky between my fingers. (c) I smelled fresh coriander at the vegetable stall.
  11. 11.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) brave (b) slow (c) soft
  12. 12.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Who painted this lovely picture___” asked Tenzin.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  13. 13.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) We ate rice and dal for dinner. (b) His heart was a drum during the race. (c) The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.
  14. 14.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The fish market had a strong smell. (b) Lightning flashed across the night sky. (c) The medicine had a bitter taste.
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Fatima is hungry? (a) Fatima was hungry. (b) Fatima rubbed her eyes and nodded off on the sofa. (c) Fatima’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  16. 16.Which strong verb means “moved slowly and quietly”? (a) glanced (b) crept (c) nibbled
  17. 17.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Yash felt very angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  18. 18.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) nice (b) fine (c) mysterious
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Manav grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.”
    (a) happy (b) hungry (c) scared
  20. 20.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock, giggled Arjun. (b) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock” giggled Arjun. (c) “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Arjun.
  21. 21.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) good (b) nice (c) naughty
  22. 22.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) silent (b) busy (c) lazy
  23. 23.Which sense does this line use?
    “The thunder crashed and roared.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  24. 24.Which strong verb could replace “moved” in this sentence?
    “The baby moved across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) crawled (b) soared (c) munched
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Tara ___ into the dark cupboard for her shoes.”
    (a) looked (b) did (c) peered
  27. 27.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Rohan kicked a pebble round and round the empty yard.”
    (a) bored (b) happy (c) hungry
  28. 28.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Arjun’s face turned red, and he clenched his fists.”
    (a) sad (b) angry (c) happy
  29. 29.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Our cat lets out a sad ___ at night.”
    (a) moo (b) ding-dong (c) meow
  30. 30.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The lion let out a mighty roar.”
    (a) mighty (b) lion (c) roar
  31. 31.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is sad? (a) Saanvi’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home. (b) Saanvi’s face turned red, and she clenched her fists. (c) Saanvi was sad.
  32. 32.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) The sunset painted the sky orange and pink. (c) The river water felt icy on my feet.
  33. 33.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as glass”
    (a) clear (b) muddy (c) soft
  34. 34.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Tears filled Tenzin’s eyes, and he stared at the floor.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “The new bicycle shone bright red.”
    (a) taste (b) sight (c) hearing
  36. 36.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My goldfish has gone missing___” sobbed Sneha.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ floor squeaked under my shoes.”
    (a) fine (b) okay (c) polished
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little brother is a chatterbox.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  39. 39.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Run, the bus is leaving___” shouted Nisha.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  40. 40.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Why is the sky blue___” asked Rohan.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a comma (,) (c) a full stop (.)

Answer key

  1. The wool blanket felt scratchy on my neck.
  2. crackle
  3. giggled
  4. nibbled
  5. simile
  6. sad
  7. smell
  8. showing
  9. trudged
  10. Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  11. brave
  12. a question mark (?)
  13. His heart was a drum during the race.
  14. The fish market had a strong smell.
  15. Fatima’s tummy rumbled loudly in the middle of class.
  16. crept
  17. telling
  18. mysterious
  19. happy
  20. “Ha ha, the puppy stole my sock,” giggled Arjun.
  21. naughty
  22. busy
  23. hearing
  24. crawled
  25. sight
  26. peered
  27. bored
  28. angry
  29. meow
  30. roar
  31. Saanvi’s shoulders drooped as she walked slowly home.
  32. The sunset painted the sky orange and pink.
  33. clear
  34. showing
  35. sight
  36. a comma (,)
  37. polished
  38. metaphor
  39. an exclamation mark (!)
  40. a question mark (?)

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