← Practice: vivid writing lesson New set →

Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 783 · 40 questions
TalentJR

Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

NameDateTime takenScore ___ / 40
  1. 1.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The sparrows ___ on my window sill.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) hiss (c) chirp
  2. 2.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The doorbell went ding-dong at noon.”
    (a) ding-dong (b) noon (c) doorbell
  3. 3.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is sad? (a) A tear rolled slowly down Diya’s cheek. (b) Diya was sad. (c) Diya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  4. 4.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The fluffy kitten curled up on my lap.”
    (a) fluffy (b) kitten (c) curled
  5. 5.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The lost child ___ until his mother found him.”
    (a) cried (b) sobbed (c) made
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The thunder crashed and roared. (b) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (c) I saw a rainbow over the green fields.
  7. 7.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Can I have one more laddoo, please?” ___ Sahil.
    (a) giggled (b) asked (c) sobbed
  8. 8.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The rooster crowed ___ at dawn.”
    (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) neigh (c) tick-tock
  9. 9.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue. (b) A whiff of incense floated from the temple. (c) Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  10. 10.Which word fits the gap best?
    “My best friend is moving away,” ___ Nisha.
    (a) asked (b) giggled (c) sobbed
  11. 11.Which sentence is a simile? (a) Dad is a walking dictionary. (b) The baby slept in the afternoon. (c) The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  12. 12.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The chubby baby giggled in the cot.”
    (a) giggled (b) baby (c) chubby
  13. 13.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The runner was as quick as lightning. (b) Her bedroom is a pigsty. (c) The dog barked at the postman.
  14. 14.Which strong verb means “looked for a long time without moving”? (a) grabbed (b) muttered (c) stared
  15. 15.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) tall (c) thud
  16. 16.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a thud.”
    (a) floor (b) bag (c) thud
  17. 17.Which strong verb could replace “looked” in this sentence?
    “The children looked at the giant elephant in surprise.”
    (a) wandered (b) stared (c) muttered
  18. 18.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleepy lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) lion (b) sleepy (c) dozed
  19. 19.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aisha was really hungry.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  20. 20.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) Run, the bus is leaving! shouted Zoya. (b) “Run, the bus is leaving” shouted Zoya. (c) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Zoya.
  21. 21.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The wind went ___ through the trees.”
    (a) hiss (b) clang (c) whoosh
  22. 22.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Grab the rope___” shouted Kavya.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  23. 23.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her hands were as cold as ice cubes.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  24. 24.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria froze and held her breath as the floor creaked.”
    (a) bored (b) scared (c) happy
  25. 25.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The tired runner ___ over the finish line.”
    (a) went (b) walked (c) staggered
  26. 26.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Zoya beamed and hugged everyone in sight.”
    (a) cold (b) hungry (c) happy
  27. 27.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The scissors went snip as Mum cut the thread.”
    (a) scissors (b) thread (c) snip
  28. 28.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Kavya is hungry? (a) Kavya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping. (b) Kavya hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Kavya was hungry.
  29. 29.Which sense does this line use?
    “The earth smelled lovely after the first rain.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a bee”
    (a) lazy (b) silent (c) busy
  31. 31.What makes the sound “splash”? (a) a jump into a pool (b) a sheep (c) a car horn
  32. 32.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Where did you put my blue pencil___” asked Ishaan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  33. 33.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The feathery grass tickled my feet.”
    (a) grass (b) feathery (c) tickled
  34. 34.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “We ___ home through the deep mud.”
    (a) trudged (b) walked (c) made
  35. 35.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The lake shone like a mirror in the sun.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  36. 36.What makes the sound “tick-tock”? (a) a heavy bag falling (b) pakoras in hot oil (c) a clock
  37. 37.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ market buzzed with voices.”
    (a) crowded (b) nice (c) good
  38. 38.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, the film is starting”, whispered Zoya. (b) “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Zoya. (c) Shh, the film is starting, whispered Zoya.
  39. 39.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ bus rattled down the road.”
    (a) fine (b) good (c) rusty
  40. 40.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Ishaan is sad? (a) Ishaan was sad. (b) Ishaan hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Ishaan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.

Answer key

  1. chirp
  2. ding-dong
  3. A tear rolled slowly down Diya’s cheek.
  4. fluffy
  5. sobbed
  6. The tamarind tasted sour on my tongue.
  7. asked
  8. cock-a-doodle-doo
  9. Lightning flashed across the night sky.
  10. sobbed
  11. The old bread was as hard as a rock.
  12. chubby
  13. The runner was as quick as lightning.
  14. stared
  15. thud
  16. thud
  17. stared
  18. sleepy
  19. telling
  20. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Zoya.
  21. whoosh
  22. an exclamation mark (!)
  23. simile
  24. scared
  25. staggered
  26. happy
  27. snip
  28. Kavya gobbled the rice and asked for a second helping.
  29. smell
  30. busy
  31. a jump into a pool
  32. a question mark (?)
  33. feathery
  34. trudged
  35. simile
  36. a clock
  37. crowded
  38. “Shh, the film is starting,” whispered Zoya.
  39. rusty
  40. Ishaan sat alone, hugging his knees and sniffing.

Free creative writing lessons, practice and worksheets at talentjr.in/creative-writing-for-kids