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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 794 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) sleepy (b) okay (c) nice
  2. 2.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a giraffe”
    (a) round (b) short (c) tall
  3. 3.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Grandpa ___ through the park after dinner.”
    (a) got (b) strolled (c) walked
  4. 4.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Rohan ___ crossly under his breath.”
    (a) spoke (b) muttered (c) got
  5. 5.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) happy (b) meow (c) garden
  6. 6.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Dev kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.”
    (a) cold (b) happy (c) hungry
  7. 7.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ thunder shook the windows.”
    (a) nice (b) booming (c) good
  8. 8.What makes the sound “woof”? (a) a lion (b) raindrops (c) a dog
  9. 9.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Where did you put my blue pencil” asked Imran. (b) Where did you put my blue pencil? asked Imran. (c) “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Imran.
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) steaming (b) nice (c) fine
  11. 11.Which strong verb could replace “went” in this sentence?
    “The cat went quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) sprinkled (b) stared (c) crept
  12. 12.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “A butterfly ___ from flower to flower.”
    (a) fluttered (b) went (c) flew
  13. 13.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose” giggled Aarav. (b) “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Aarav. (c) Ha ha, you have milk on your nose, giggled Aarav.
  14. 14.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Her bedroom is a pigsty.”
    (a) simile (b) neither (c) metaphor
  15. 15.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (b) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden. (c) Fireflies glowed like tiny lamps in the dark.
  16. 16.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a slurp.”
    (a) slurp (b) drank (c) lassi
  17. 17.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Tears filled Diya’s eyes, and she stared at the floor.”
    (a) happy (b) angry (c) sad
  18. 18.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My goldfish has gone missing___” sobbed Dev.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) soup (b) filled (c) steaming
  20. 20.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The juicy mangoes filled the basket.”
    (a) mangoes (b) filled (c) juicy
  21. 21.Which strong verb could replace “threw” in this sentence?
    “Dad threw the keys onto the table.”
    (a) slammed (b) tossed (c) raced
  22. 22.Which line uses the sense of touch? (a) The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy. (b) A whistle blew at the start of the race. (c) I tasted the soup and added more salt.
  23. 23.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ parcel arrived on my birthday.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) mysterious
  24. 24.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) cock-a-doodle-doo (b) slowly (c) window
  25. 25.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Riya was really cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  26. 26.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Meera is scared? (a) Meera gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut. (b) Meera’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter. (c) Meera was scared.
  27. 27.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The spiky cactus pricked my finger.”
    (a) cactus (b) pricked (c) spiky
  28. 28.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Neel felt very cold.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  29. 29.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) chair (b) pop (c) window
  30. 30.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bowler ___ the ball towards the stumps.”
    (a) threw (b) did (c) hurled
  31. 31.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) hoot (b) happy (c) pencil
  32. 32.What makes the sound “knock”? (a) a duck (b) a crisp papad (c) a visitor at the door
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “We watched the peacock open its blue tail.”
    (a) taste (b) touch (c) sight
  34. 34.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ fireworks lit up the sky.”
    (a) fine (b) dazzling (c) nice
  35. 35.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Aarav is bored? (a) Aarav sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Aarav hummed a tune and could not stop smiling. (c) Aarav was bored.
  36. 36.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat,” ___ Arjun.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  37. 37.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The lion let out a mighty ___.”
    (a) baa (b) roar (c) sizzle
  38. 38.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as honey”
    (a) bitter (b) sour (c) sweet
  39. 39.Which sense does this line use?
    “The bees buzzed around the hive.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) touch
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Shh, we are in the library” whispered Tenzin. (b) “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Tenzin. (c) “Shh, we are in the library”, whispered Tenzin.

Answer key

  1. sleepy
  2. tall
  3. strolled
  4. muttered
  5. meow
  6. hungry
  7. booming
  8. a dog
  9. “Where did you put my blue pencil?” asked Imran.
  10. steaming
  11. crept
  12. fluttered
  13. “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” giggled Aarav.
  14. metaphor
  15. The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron.
  16. slurp
  17. sad
  18. a comma (,)
  19. steaming
  20. juicy
  21. tossed
  22. The kitten’s fur felt soft and fluffy.
  23. mysterious
  24. cock-a-doodle-doo
  25. telling
  26. Meera gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed her eyes shut.
  27. spiky
  28. telling
  29. pop
  30. hurled
  31. hoot
  32. a visitor at the door
  33. sight
  34. dazzling
  35. Aarav sighed and flipped through the same comic again.
  36. giggled
  37. roar
  38. sweet
  39. hearing
  40. “Shh, we are in the library,” whispered Tenzin.

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