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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 865 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) good (b) fine (c) muddy
  2. 2.What makes the sound “pitter-patter”? (a) a rooster (b) raindrops (c) a camera
  3. 3.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) quickly (b) chair (c) buzz
  4. 4.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Dev’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  5. 5.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Riya is scared? (a) Riya was scared. (b) Riya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet. (c) Riya kept peeping into the kitchen for lunch.
  6. 6.Which line uses the sense of hearing? (a) Rain drummed on the tin roof all night. (b) The kulfi tasted of cardamom and saffron. (c) I sniffed the scent of jasmine in the garden.
  7. 7.Which strong verb could replace “ran” in this sentence?
    “The two friends ran to the gate to see who was fastest.”
    (a) gobbled (b) slammed (c) raced
  8. 8.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “Grandma’s garden is a rainbow of flowers.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  9. 9.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) tall (b) kind (c) drip
  10. 10.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aarav was really angry.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  11. 11.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sticky jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) sticky (b) jalebis (c) dripped
  12. 12.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The frogs ___ all night in the monsoon.”
    (a) tick-tock (b) croak (c) boom
  13. 13.Which sense does this line use?
    “The clay cup felt hot in my hands.”
    (a) smell (b) sight (c) touch
  14. 14.What makes the sound “thud”? (a) a microwave (b) a cat (c) a heavy bag falling
  15. 15.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Saanvi could barely keep her eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) hungry (b) tired (c) sad
  16. 16.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Arjun’s heart thumped, and he hid under the sheet.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  17. 17.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The crowd cheered loudly for our team. (b) The snail felt slimy on my palm. (c) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  18. 18.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The leaking tap went drip in the dark.”
    (a) dark (b) tap (c) drip
  19. 19.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The icy wind howled all night.”
    (a) icy (b) wind (c) howled
  20. 20.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The shop sells pencils and erasers. (b) The stars were diamonds in the night sky. (c) The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds.
  21. 21.Which strong verb could replace “held” in this sentence?
    “Diya held her mother’s hand in the crowd.”
    (a) tumbled (b) blazed (c) clutched
  22. 22.Which strong verb could replace “fell” in this sentence?
    “The diver fell into the deep pool.”
    (a) wandered (b) crept (c) plunged
  23. 23.Which strong verb could replace “put” in this sentence?
    “Nani put sugar over the hot pancakes.”
    (a) hurled (b) sprinkled (c) crept
  24. 24.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ dog barked at the stranger.”
    (a) good (b) okay (c) shaggy
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “The snail felt slimy on my palm.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  26. 26.What makes the sound “knock”? (a) a visitor at the door (b) an owl (c) a sheep
  27. 27.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Farhan shivered and stamped his feet in the snow.”
    (a) angry (b) happy (c) cold
  28. 28.Which strong verb means “threw with great force”? (a) tumbled (b) crawled (c) hurled
  29. 29.Which word fits the gap best?
    “Ha ha, you have milk on your nose,” ___ Dev.
    (a) asked (b) sobbed (c) giggled
  30. 30.Which strong verb means “took a very quick look”? (a) giggled (b) gobbled (c) glanced
  31. 31.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row. (b) Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh. (c) The temple bells rang out loudly.
  32. 32.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Run, the bus is leaving” shouted Manav. (b) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Manav. (c) Run, the bus is leaving! shouted Manav.
  33. 33.Which sense does this line use?
    “The crowd cheered loudly for our team.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) smell
  34. 34.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Vihaan licked his lips as the smell of dosas drifted in.”
    (a) sad (b) scared (c) hungry
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) sight (b) taste (c) touch
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Look out, the shelf is falling” shouted Kavya. (b) “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Kavya. (c) Look out, the shelf is falling! shouted Kavya.
  37. 37.Which sentence is a simile? (a) The cat sat on the warm mat. (b) The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang. (c) The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  38. 38.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My father bought a new umbrella.”
    (a) simile (b) metaphor (c) neither
  39. 39.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Saanvi is angry? (a) Saanvi sighed and flipped through the same comic again. (b) Saanvi was angry. (c) Saanvi stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “The pressure cooker hissed three times.”
    (a) touch (b) hearing (c) smell

Answer key

  1. muddy
  2. raindrops
  3. buzz
  4. showing
  5. Riya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.
  6. Rain drummed on the tin roof all night.
  7. raced
  8. metaphor
  9. drip
  10. telling
  11. sticky
  12. croak
  13. touch
  14. a heavy bag falling
  15. tired
  16. showing
  17. The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich.
  18. drip
  19. icy
  20. The stars twinkled like tiny diamonds.
  21. clutched
  22. plunged
  23. sprinkled
  24. shaggy
  25. touch
  26. a visitor at the door
  27. cold
  28. hurled
  29. giggled
  30. glanced
  31. Dad sniffed the milk to check if it was fresh.
  32. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Manav.
  33. hearing
  34. hungry
  35. sight
  36. “Look out, the shelf is falling!” shouted Kavya.
  37. The tired dog snored like a tractor.
  38. neither
  39. Saanvi stamped her foot and slammed the door.
  40. hearing

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