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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 954 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The heavy bag fell to the floor with a thud.”
    (a) bag (b) floor (c) thud
  2. 2.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) kind (b) oink (c) gentle
  3. 3.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The water was as clear as glass. (b) The library is a treasure chest of stories. (c) It rained all night in our town.
  4. 4.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ teddy bear sat on my bed.”
    (a) okay (b) cuddly (c) fine
  5. 5.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “My best friend is moving away___” sobbed Riya.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  6. 6.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The children played cricket after school. (b) Our teacher is a fountain of ideas. (c) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow.
  7. 7.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The sleepy lion dozed in the shade.”
    (a) dozed (b) lion (c) sleepy
  8. 8.Which sense does this line use?
    “The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) sight
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ cushion sank under me.”
    (a) squishy (b) good (c) fine
  10. 10.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) good (b) naughty (c) nice
  11. 11.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “What time does the train leave___” asked Diya.
    (a) a comma (,) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a full stop (.)
  12. 12.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Meera counted the ceiling fans for the tenth time.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  13. 13.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Ha ha, the goat ate your hat___” giggled Nisha.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) a comma (,)
  14. 14.What makes the sound “vroom”? (a) a motorbike (b) a frog (c) a duck
  15. 15.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Diya is cold? (a) Diya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter. (b) Diya’s knees shook, and she hid behind the door. (c) Diya was cold.
  16. 16.Which word is an onomatopoeia (a word that sounds like the noise it names)? (a) neigh (b) tall (c) chair
  17. 17.Which strong verb means “shut hard and loudly”? (a) gobbled (b) slammed (c) crept
  18. 18.Which strong verb could replace “flew” in this sentence?
    “The eagle flew above the hills.”
    (a) trudged (b) soared (c) crept
  19. 19.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Ananya’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) happy (b) bored (c) scared
  20. 20.What makes the sound “pop”? (a) a noisy drinker (b) a cow (c) a balloon
  21. 21.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Sahil is happy? (a) Sahil grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road. (b) Sahil gripped Mum’s hand and squeezed his eyes shut. (c) Sahil was happy.
  22. 22.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) The playground was an oven in May. (b) Grandpa’s beard is as white as snow. (c) The train left the station at nine.
  23. 23.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Is it time for lunch yet___” asked Vihaan.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a question mark (?) (c) a comma (,)
  24. 24.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Dad ___ the keys onto the table.”
    (a) went (b) tossed (c) threw
  25. 25.Which sense does this line use?
    “The scent of Grandma’s perfume filled the room.”
    (a) sight (b) touch (c) smell
  26. 26.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The cat ___ quietly towards the pigeon.”
    (a) went (b) crept (c) got
  27. 27.Which sense does this line use?
    “The lake sparkled under the full moon.”
    (a) hearing (b) sight (c) taste
  28. 28.Which strong verb means “took hold of quickly and roughly”? (a) grabbed (b) plunged (c) sipped
  29. 29.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Sahil felt very tired.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  30. 30.Which sense does this line use?
    “The wet soap slipped from my hands.”
    (a) touch (b) smell (c) hearing
  31. 31.Which strong verb means “walked slowly with heavy steps”? (a) munched (b) blazed (c) trudged
  32. 32.Which sentence is a metaphor? (a) Her smile was as bright as the sun. (b) The teacher wrote the date on the board. (c) The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  33. 33.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Maria threw down the pencil and shouted, “Not fair!””
    (a) bored (b) angry (c) tired
  34. 34.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “My little brother is a chatterbox.”
    (a) neither (b) metaphor (c) simile
  35. 35.Which sense does this line use?
    “Lightning flashed across the night sky.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) taste
  36. 36.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “I miss my grandma so much”, sobbed Nisha. (b) “I miss my grandma so much” sobbed Nisha. (c) “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Nisha.
  37. 37.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) soft (c) brave
  38. 38.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is angry? (a) Manav was angry. (b) Manav folded his arms and glared at his brother. (c) Manav froze and held his breath as the floor creaked.
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “An owl gave a hoot from the banyan tree.”
    (a) tree (b) hoot (c) owl
  40. 40.Which sense does this line use?
    “I heard the koel singing in the mango tree.”
    (a) sight (b) hearing (c) touch

Answer key

  1. thud
  2. oink
  3. The library is a treasure chest of stories.
  4. cuddly
  5. a comma (,)
  6. Our teacher is a fountain of ideas.
  7. sleepy
  8. smell
  9. squishy
  10. naughty
  11. a question mark (?)
  12. showing
  13. a comma (,)
  14. a motorbike
  15. Diya’s teeth chattered, and she pulled her shawl tighter.
  16. neigh
  17. slammed
  18. soared
  19. scared
  20. a balloon
  21. Sahil grinned from ear to ear and skipped down the road.
  22. The playground was an oven in May.
  23. a question mark (?)
  24. tossed
  25. smell
  26. crept
  27. sight
  28. grabbed
  29. telling
  30. touch
  31. trudged
  32. The moon was a silver plate in the sky.
  33. angry
  34. metaphor
  35. sight
  36. “I miss my grandma so much,” sobbed Nisha.
  37. brave
  38. Manav folded his arms and glared at his brother.
  39. hoot
  40. hearing

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