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Vivid Writing Practice Worksheet

Creative writing lesson 16: Practice: vivid writing · Set 961 · 40 questions
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Writer's tip (Make the reader see it): Decide which tool the question is about. Use that lesson’s tip: a sense, showing actions, like / as or IS, a sound word, a strong verb, an exact adjective, or speech marks. Read your choice aloud — does it paint a clear picture?

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  1. 1.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ elephant stomped across the river.”
    (a) nice (b) enormous (c) okay
  2. 2.Which line uses the sense of sight? (a) The old door creaked as it opened. (b) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen. (c) I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  3. 3.Which strong verb could replace “spoke” in this sentence?
    “Mum spoke softly so that she would not wake the baby.”
    (a) leapt (b) trudged (c) whispered
  4. 4.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) The gulab jamun tasted sweet and rich. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  5. 5.Which strong verb could replace “jumped” in this sentence?
    “The deer jumped over the fallen log.”
    (a) gulped (b) munched (c) leapt
  6. 6.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The naughty puppy chewed my slipper.”
    (a) puppy (b) chewed (c) naughty
  7. 7.Which line uses the sense of smell? (a) We watched the peacock open its blue tail. (b) The bitter gourd tasted bitter. (c) The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  8. 8.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Aryan could barely keep his eyes open at dinner.”
    (a) telling (b) showing
  9. 9.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ ant carried a crumb.”
    (a) good (b) tiny (c) nice
  10. 10.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The motorbike went ___ down the road.”
    (a) hoot (b) woof (c) vroom
  11. 11.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Joseph hummed a tune and could not stop smiling.”
    (a) bored (b) angry (c) happy
  12. 12.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “Catch the ball___” shouted Sneha.
    (a) a question mark (?) (b) a full stop (.) (c) an exclamation mark (!)
  13. 13.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ jalebis dripped with syrup.”
    (a) fine (b) sticky (c) nice
  14. 14.Which sense does this line use?
    “The rubbish dump gave off a terrible stink.”
    (a) hearing (b) smell (c) sight
  15. 15.Which strong verb means “walked around with no plan”? (a) shouted (b) wandered (c) giggled
  16. 16.Which strong verb could replace “walked” in this sentence?
    “We walked home through the deep mud.”
    (a) trudged (b) munched (c) slammed
  17. 17.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The bonfire ___ on Lohri night.”
    (a) went (b) burned (c) blazed
  18. 18.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The coach ___ to us from across the big field.”
    (a) shouted (b) spoke (c) had
  19. 19.Which describing word paints the clearest picture?
    “The ___ pond had lots of frogs.”
    (a) muddy (b) okay (c) fine
  20. 20.Which strong verb could replace “laughed” in this sentence?
    “The girls laughed at the funny cartoon.”
    (a) wandered (b) giggled (c) crept
  21. 21.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Saanvi. (b) Run, the bus is leaving! shouted Saanvi. (c) “Run, the bus is leaving” shouted Saanvi.
  22. 22.Which sense does this line use?
    “Colourful kites dotted the blue sky.”
    (a) sight (b) smell (c) hearing
  23. 23.Is this a simile, a metaphor or neither?
    “The classroom was a zoo after the bell rang.”
    (a) neither (b) simile (c) metaphor
  24. 24.Which sense does this line use?
    “Diyas twinkled on every windowsill.”
    (a) smell (b) hearing (c) sight
  25. 25.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “The pigs ___ in the muddy farmyard.”
    (a) knock (b) click (c) oink
  26. 26.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The striped snake slid under the rock.”
    (a) slid (b) striped (c) snake
  27. 27.Is this sentence showing or telling?
    “Pooja’s heart thumped, and she hid under the sheet.”
    (a) showing (b) telling
  28. 28.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Tara. (b) “Who painted this lovely picture” asked Tara. (c) Who painted this lovely picture? asked Tara.
  29. 29.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “The baby ___ across the carpet to her toy.”
    (a) moved (b) went (c) crawled
  30. 30.Complete the simile:
    “as ___ as a lion”
    (a) slow (b) soft (c) brave
  31. 31.Which word is the adjective (describing word) in this sentence?
    “The steaming soup filled our bowls.”
    (a) filled (b) steaming (c) soup
  32. 32.Which sense does this line use?
    “The temple bells rang out loudly.”
    (a) touch (b) taste (c) hearing
  33. 33.Which mark goes in the gap?
    “I miss my grandma so much___” sobbed Tara.
    (a) a full stop (.) (b) a comma (,) (c) a question mark (?)
  34. 34.Which line uses the sense of taste? (a) The new bicycle shone bright red. (b) The warm sand tickled my toes. (c) The sea tasted very salty.
  35. 35.Which sound word fits the gap?
    “Ravi drank his lassi with a ___.”
    (a) slurp (b) neigh (c) vroom
  36. 36.Which verb paints the clearest picture?
    “Aarav ___ at the clock and hurried out.”
    (a) did (b) looked (c) glanced
  37. 37.Which sentence SHOWS (without telling) that Manav is sad? (a) Manav’s eyelids drooped, and he yawned again and again. (b) Manav was sad. (c) Manav’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  38. 38.Which feeling does this sentence show?
    “Sneha’s nose turned pink, and she pulled on a woolly cap.”
    (a) scared (b) cold (c) sad
  39. 39.Which is the sound word in this sentence?
    “The sparrows chirp on my window sill.”
    (a) sparrows (b) window (c) chirp
  40. 40.Which sentence is punctuated correctly? (a) “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Diya. (b) “Help, the boat is sinking”! shouted Diya. (c) “Help, the boat is sinking” shouted Diya.

Answer key

  1. enormous
  2. I saw tall yellow sunflowers in a row.
  3. whispered
  4. The smell of fresh bread filled the kitchen.
  5. leapt
  6. naughty
  7. The smell of frying onions floated out of the kitchen.
  8. showing
  9. tiny
  10. vroom
  11. happy
  12. an exclamation mark (!)
  13. sticky
  14. smell
  15. wandered
  16. trudged
  17. blazed
  18. shouted
  19. muddy
  20. giggled
  21. “Run, the bus is leaving!” shouted Saanvi.
  22. sight
  23. metaphor
  24. sight
  25. oink
  26. striped
  27. showing
  28. “Who painted this lovely picture?” asked Tara.
  29. crawled
  30. brave
  31. steaming
  32. hearing
  33. a comma (,)
  34. The sea tasted very salty.
  35. slurp
  36. glanced
  37. Manav’s shoulders drooped as he walked slowly home.
  38. cold
  39. chirp
  40. “Help, the boat is sinking!” shouted Diya.

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